Wow, this could really work

I can't wait until my writers group meeting tonight. I think Im on to something and can't wait to get thier feedback. My only real concern is getting too dark in the story. Not to say that I want it to be sunshine and buttercups, but not dark and scary and unrelatable. So wish me luck. Here is a bit.

I would otherwise be happy to bring friends over, but not while Billy is there.